October 30, 2017 Science Fiction Makes You Stupid
That is a scientifically grounded claim.
Cognitive psychologist Dan Johnson and I make a version of it in our paper “The Genre Effect: A Science Fiction (vs. Realism) Manipulation Decreases Inference Effort, Reading Comprehension, and Perceptions of Literary Merit,” forthcoming from Scientific Study of Literature.
Dan and I are both professors at Washington and Lee University, and our collaboration grew out of my annoyance at another study, “Reading Literary Fiction Improves Theory of Mind,” published in Science in 2013. Boiled down, the authors claimed reading literary fiction makes you smart. And, who knows, maybe it does, but if so, their study gets no closer to understanding why–or even what anyone means by the term “literary fiction” as opposed to, say, “science fiction.”
Our study defines those terms, creates two texts that differ accordingly, and then studies how readers respond to them. The results surprised us. Readers read science fiction badly. If you’d like all the details why, head over to Scientific Study of Literature. Meanwhile, here’s a preview, beginning with the study set-up:
Rather than selecting different texts based on expert but unquantifiable impressions of literariness or nonliterariness, our study uses a single, short text that we manipulate to produce isolated and controlled differences. The text is less than a thousand words and depicts a main character entering a public eating area and interacting with acquaintances including a server after his negative opinion of the community has been made public. We designate the first version as “Narrative Realism,” the common designation for literary fiction that takes place in a contemporary setting but does not fit another subgenre, such as romance or mystery, that also takes place in contemporary settings. In the narrative realism version, the main character enters a diner after his letter to the editor has been published in the town newspaper. Rather than attempting to study multiple subgenres, we select one, designating the second version “Science Fiction,” the most common term for fiction that includes such “accessible, well known features” as “interplanetary travel and aliens,” “hypothetical advances in technology and science,” and being “set in the future” (Dixon & Bortolussi, 2005, p. 15). In the Science Fiction version, the main character enters a galley in a distant space station populated by humans, aliens, and androids. The Narrative Realism and Science Fiction versions are identical except for setting-creating words, such as “door” and “airlock.” Both versions, therefore, should promote identical levels of theory of mind, requiring a reader to draw inferences about the main character’s and other characters’ unstated thoughts and feelings.
Because Kidd and Castano (2013) identified theory of mind as the distinguishing quality of literary fiction, we also created two versions of Narrative Realism and Science Fiction. The first version of each included statements that directly state a character’s thoughts and feelings, for example, “Jim knows everyone in the diner will be angry at him.” The second version of each includes no theory of mind explaining statements. The versions of the texts that include theory of mind explaining statements should have lower theory of mind demands than the versions that do not include them, because the explanations state the inferences the text would otherwise only imply. If theory of mind is the defining quality of literary fiction, then the texts with theory of mind explanations would be comparatively nonliterary.
In addition to theory of mind, we address an additional form of inference, which we call theory of world. Where theory of mind requires the inference and representation of a character’s implicit thoughts and emotions, theory of world requires the inference and representation of a world’s implicit laws and systems, potentially including such things as laws of physics, systems of social organization, and public history. Both texts, for example, include a sentence that begins: “He was awake in his bunk just a few hours ago, staring at …”; the narrative realism version then continues: “… the shadows of his ceiling slowly ebbing to pink, when the delivery kid’s bicycle rattled onto the gravel of his driveway,” while the science fiction version continues: “… the gray of his sky-replicating ceiling slowly ebbing to pink, when the satellite dish mounted above his quarters started grinding into position to receive the day’s messages relayed from Earth.” Although theory of world would be present in both Narrative Realism and Science Fiction, because Narrative Realism’s world is a representation of the reader’s world, theory of world demands are minimal. Because science fiction often depicts worlds that differ significantly from a reader’s world, theory of world demands would be higher. The narrative-realism text then should promote theory of mind but not theory of world, and the science-fiction text should promote theory of mind to the same degree as the narrative-realism text and theory of world to a greater degree.
Such an understanding, however, treats both theory of mind and theory of world as intrinsic qualities, while ignoring the role of extrinsic influences. The term “narrative realism” is sometimes conflated with the term “literary fiction” because narrative realism is a genre distinct from “genre fiction” and exists only in the sometimes mislabeled category of “literary fiction.” But if literary fiction is defined by theory of mind, a story’s setting, whether realistic or fantastical, indicates nothing about its literariness. However, while neither narrative realism nor science fiction then are more likely to be literary in terms of intrinsic qualities, we hypothesize that the narrative-realism text is more likely to be extrinsically identified as literary and that the science-fiction text is more likely to be extrinsically identified as nonliterary. Because theory of world is more prevalent in science fiction than in narrative realism, the promotion of theory of world processing is also more likely to be extrinsically identified as nonliterary.
And here are some of our results:
Addressing the effects of genre first, in comparison to Narrative Realism readers, Science Fiction readers reported lower transportation, experience taking, and empathy. Science Fiction readers also reported exerting greater effort to understand the world of the story, but less effort to understand the minds of the characters. Science Fiction readers scored lower in comprehension, generally and in the subcategories of theory of mind, world, and plot. The last finding is striking because Science Fiction readers reported exerting the same level of effort for understanding plot as Narrative Realism readers, but their actual comprehension of plot was weaker. Science Fiction readers reported exerting a lower level of effort for understanding theory of mind than Narrative Realism readers, and scored comparatively lower in theory of mind comprehension. Science Fiction readers even scored lower in theory of world comprehension, the one area they reported higher inference effort than for Narrative Realism readers.
Comparatively higher theory of world effort and lower theory of world comprehension, however, should be expected because a narratively realistic setting is understood to be a representation of the reader’s own world, allowing high comprehension with little effort. The science-fiction setting demanded far more inference and so greater effort to achieve comprehension. As discussed, we hypothesized this difference in theory of world to be a defining difference between science fiction and narrative realism.
The Science Fiction’s lower plot and theory of mind scores, however, are not a result of intrinsic qualities, unless the theory of world features influenced theory of mind processes. Because the science-fiction and narrative-realism texts differ according to theory of world but are essentially identical for plot and theory of mind, effort reports and comprehension of plot and theory of mind should be statistically the same. Therefore we conclude that the difference is a product of the readers’ prior social constructs regarding texts like Science Fiction and Narrative Realism. Since science fiction is “characterized as being focused on settings and content, with comparatively less emphasis on interpersonal relationships” (Fong, Mullin, & Mar, 2013, p. 371), that expectation may produce an assumption of nonliterariness for readers who also experience theory of mind-promotion as a primary quality of literariness. Science fiction story details would therefore produce a lower perception of literary quality. Based on their low theory of mind effort scores, the Science Fiction readers expected a story that involved less theory of mind. This expectation, or a subsequent exertion of less theory of mind effort, would also account for the low theory of mind comprehension. Though readers were neutral regarding plot effort, lower plot comprehension suggests a generally lower exertion in reading effort. The Science Fiction readers appear to have expected an overall simpler story to comprehend, an expectation that overrode the actual qualities of the story itself. The science fiction setting triggered poorer overall reading.
And if you’d like to see the actual texts we used in the experiment, they’re now here.
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NIMRODTZARKING
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This is very interesting and I’m excited to read the full paper when it’s released. I hope it’s not inappropriate to share a few random thoughts, questions and ideas. I teach reading strategies, specifically strategies for clarifying confusion, which is a fascinatingly intersubjective process that I’m always looking to understand better.
I’m curious in particular about how you measured reading comprehension for theory of world. Was it based on readers’ perception of comprehension or some external test? I’ve often found a disconnect between the feeling of confusion and the state of not comprehending- people often feel confused because they presume there are unknown unknowns that they’ve yet to uncover, and likewise feel inappropriately competent when there actually ARE unknown unknowns that they’ve failed to consider.
That said, I’m not overly skeptical to the conclusions. Even as a science fiction fan, it’s conceivable to me that the genre may simplify many of life’s complex processes (both in our minds and our worlds) with the use of fantastical short-hand. Consider the film The Shining, where the audience is presented with a painful depiction of a dysfunctional family, but can overlook how that dysfunction leads to Jack Torrance’s bloody outbursts by instead accepting the fantastic explanation that ‘ghosts did it.’
I wonder, then, if this simplification can allow science fiction to consider some ideas in greater complexity, the same way other forms of simplification and codification streamline thought. Perhaps this has some relation to the relationship between myth and spirituality, where fantastical stories are treated as gateway metaphors for deeper, stranger truths.
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Chris Gavaler
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We used an objective quiz to determine comprehension. Also, to your point, the scifi readers said that understanding the story required less effort, unaware that they were not comprehending it fully.
Of course when I tried this with my own class–who were well aware of the category of “literary genre fiction”–they found the story required higher effort because they expected to read it at multiple levels. So they understood that “literary” and “science fiction” are not opposites already and so escaped “the genre effect” of reading poorly because of genre assumptions.
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Jo Lindsay Walton
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Can’t wait to read the full paper! I can already tell that the science fiction readers comprehended the story better than the authors of the paper.
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Klaus Æ Mogensen
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Chris, you say that the non-science fiction readers in the test were your own class. Do you think it is fair to compare the literary comprehension of what I assume are literature students with sf readers why aren’t literature students?
Have you tried the same test with randomly selected science fiction and non-science fiction readers among, say, students of economy or science?
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Chris Gavaler
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Sorry, I wasn’t being clear: I did a side round with my students, but they weren’t part of the actual study and its results. The readers in the study were entirely random.
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Andy Sawyer
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“”The Narrative Realism and Science Fiction versions are identical except for setting-creating words, such as “door” and “airlock.” ” I’m not sure how far this creates anything other than a genre-realist story with science fiction props in the way that bad space-opera is said to be simply “cops and robbers in space” with aliens playing the part of the “robbers”. My initial reaction would be, did you look at how, say Samuel R. Delany engages with the idea of the ‘protocols’ of science fiction and try to test whether the readers were engaged with that? Were there elements that tested the readers expectations in the way that science fiction nudges readers into considering difference?
Having said that, while I find the headline offensive in a click-baity sort of way, I would certainly agree with “Readers read science fiction badly,” and ” The Science Fiction readers appear to have expected an overall simpler story to comprehend, an expectation that overrode the actual qualities of the story itself” Or at least that *many* readers do so. But these readers are (and this is important, I think), in my own experience BOTH readers who think that “literary” fiction is superior AND those who are avid fans of certain kinds of sf. It would be interesting to know how the test readers were selected, and whether they knew from the start that they were going to read science fiction or non-science fiction.
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Chris Gavaler
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All good points, Andy. The readers were all online volunteers who did not know what they were going to read until they were reading it, and neither version was identified as being of any particular genre. As far as whether the SF version was really SF or just realist with SF props, that’s open to debate. But that’s also why we created the category theory-of-world, which tends to be a distinguishing feature of SF but not narrative realism. Also, as you imply, SF is a broad category, so it’s reasonable to say our findings only apply to certain kinds of SF stories, specifically Star Trek-like space operas. But I do think the prejudice against SF is broad enough that it likely produces poor reading across the SF spectrum. But, as I learned working with a cognitive psychologist, you can only test one thing at a time.
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Jo Lindsay Walton
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Yes, there is a bit of a mismatch between the heading and the results reported!
The results are broadly what we’d expect though, no? Anecdotally, introspectively, that’s what reading SF feels like: there’s a constant, low level uncertainty as to what’s going on. There’s a bit of you that is constantly assessing how things might fit together. If I was going to be crudely reductive about it, I would describe inhabiting that uncertainty as ‘making you clever’ (at least temporarily). That’s the main Suvinian take anyway …
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Jo Lindsay Walton
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But I don’t mean to sound kind of partisan or celebratory or anything, like suggest that SF is categorically perspective-widening in some politically meaningful way. At the very least, this research could prompt literary SF studies to examine the kind of negative moments/aspects of estrangement that so often get sidelined. Bewilderment, eroded expectations of world-integration, and perhaps the evolution of a clutch of heuristics that are good for nothing other than taking pleasure in reading SF without noticing how much of it you’re missing. The noncognitive estrangement of SF, perhaps you could say.
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Chris Gavaler
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I apologize for the title mismatch. I admit I was hoping to attract attention to the study. And, yes, the results were what I predicted when I designed it: that there’s a prejudice against SF as being of lower literary quality. I was surprised though how much of an effect it had on readers, that we could objectively show that their genre expectations made them read less attentively. And I see this prejudice as against formulaic SF, which biased readers seem to assume applies to all SF. What I personally think of as SF, or “literary SF,” is exactly what you describe above, a genre that requires greater attention because of its higher inference demands. That subgenre is more challenging (and interesting to me) than almost all narrative realism.
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Dan Sutton
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What type of science fiction are you talking about? As with every genre, there’s a large proportion of pulp content to appeal to the proles, and then there’s real science fiction for the intellectuals. Don’t you think your study would’ve worked better had you split your readers by the level of comprehension required to be able to read whatever it is that they’re reading? In light of the fact that you didn’t, the question, “What’s your frame of reference?” springs irresistibly to mind.
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Chris Gavaler
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That’s exactly right, Dan. When I ran a version of this experiment on the students in my advanced creative writing course (which was focused on what I call “literary genre fiction,” as opposed to pulp), they suffered from no genre effect–no prejudiced assumption that SF is less literary than narrative realism. The problem with designing a scientific study is the limited number of factors you can divide at a time. So readers were undifferentiated, and likely included far more “proles” than “intellectuals.” It’s also very hard to objectively determine whether a reader is biased against SF since the study itself revealed that bias. It’s not enough even to determine general reading skill levels, since the prejudice exists independent of reading skill. So the only way to determine a reader’s level of comprehension was to test it within the study itself, which we did. But I agree: a follow-up study could focus next on divided reader groups.
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David Jaques-Watson
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Chris, for your divided reader groups, you may like to review C. S. Lewis’ essay entitled “On Science Fiction” published in _Of This and Other Worlds_, Walter Hooper (ed.), 1984.
In the essay, Lewis distinguishes between various types of s-f (what we would call “genres” today). The version which merely takes commonplace scenes and applies a veneer of science fiction sounds like “Displaced Authors”, as Lewis labels them. Authors who really wanted to be writing something else, but jumped on the s-f bandwagon because it was selling well. Lewis calls this approach tasteless, but this mediocrity may also partially help explain your findings.
Out of that comes this sentence, which could be a subtitle for your study: “Whatever in a work of art is not used is doing harm”.
There are other genres noted in the essay as well. It would be interesting to see a further study which attempted to differentiate between genres.
Note: apart from categorising genres, the essay has an undertone of being a defence of science fiction, which also comes across in a number of the collected essays. In “Unreal Estates” (a three-way conversation betwelen Lewis, Brian Aldiss, and Kingsley Amis), Amis says “The prejudice of supposedly educated persons towards this type of fiction is fantastic. […] It’s time more people caught on. We’ve been telling them about it for some time.” Which is why I was encouraged when you wrote that your students, when they were ‘in the know’, so to speak, “suffered from no genre effect–no prejudiced assumption that SF is less literary than narrative realism”.
Footnote: I have found an online copy of the essay here:
https://www.catholicculture.org/culture/library/view.cfm?recnum=9116
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Dan Sutton
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Very good. I think, in terms of identifying which science fiction speaks to which type of reader, you should probably start by subcategorizing science fiction itself: “Brave New World” should be categorized differently from “Dune”, which is different again from “Neuromancer”, and so on – and we haven’t even got to pulp science fiction yet. There’s enough differentiation within the genre to allow for differences as extreme as “War and Peace” vs. “Fifty Shades of Grey”…
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greghullender
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Speaking as a reviewer, I’ll just say that a mainstream story that has been converted to SF merely by changing the scenery typically gets reviewed as “not really SF.” Most magazines state that they won’t accept such stories in the first place.
The speculative element must be essential to the story; otherwise it isn’t SF.
So all you’ve really shown is that readers respond more poorly to a mainstream story after it’s been hacked to look like an SF story.
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Chris Gavaler
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Greg, that’s what I thought at first too. But then one of the better readers from my creative writing class looked at the SF story and interpreted the surface elements in a revealingly deep way–meaning the surface wasn’t just a surface; it resonated to deeper levels.
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greghullender
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That may be, but if the speculative element is disposable, then it’s not a very good SF story. This is a firm principle. Look at what wins awards; it’s not stories with little speculative content.
What you have looks like SF, but it isn’t really SF.
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Chris Gavaler
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Oh, it’s definitely not a good SF story. It’s also not a good narrative realism story. It’s at best mediocre in either. It was written solely for the purpose of the study. I tried adapting pre-existing stories, but there were too many factors to control for. But a mediocre SF story is still categorically a SF story. And it really is unclear if the speculative element is disposable. When it is removed, it becomes a different story–probably an even less good one. But I agree with the principle–it’s one I teach to my creative writing classes: the speculative element has to matter at a deep level.
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Chris Gavaler
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Thanks, David. I’ve not read that Lewis essay, and it sounds like I need too. Interestingly, I actually tell my creative writing students something similar: the surface elements needs to serve the deep elements. And by surface I usually mean things like plot, form, and genre tropes, where deep usually gets at character and character relationships. Too often students reuse genre tropes for no particularly satisfying reason. For me “literary” is that deeper stuff, which may or may not be linked to genre or not.
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Klaus Æ Mogensen
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I would suggest changing the test somwehat: Take an award-winning science fiction short story and an award-winning mainstream story (both contemporary) of similar length and test these on science fiction and non-science fiction readers of otherwise similar background.
I would expect the mainstream readers to struggle more with the subtexts of the science fiction story, and vice versa: You comprehend the sort of text you’re used to better.
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Chris Gavaler
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I was thinking of similar variations, using a George Saunders story and a Robert Heinlein story. Finding a way to objectively categorize readers though is a lot more challenging. Still working on it though.
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NIMRODTZARKING
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You might even consider using two texts from the same author. Saunders, for instance, has a couple of speculative works to his name, including Science Fiction. Alternatively, you could compare comprehension of Gibson’s cyberpunk novel Neuromancer (or similar) to his cyberpunk-influenced contemporary fiction like Pattern Recognition.
I also wonder at how your findings would apply to stories where the science fiction elements are essential to the story but remain segregated to the end of the text. I’m thinking specifically of Chairman Spaceman, by Thomas Pierce (available here: https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2017/01/16/chairman-spaceman).
Without spoiling things too heavily, science fiction elements are hinted at in the rising action of the story but by my reading are ‘plausibly deniable.’ Until you get to the resolution, I think you could interpret the space travel and cryonics in the story using real-life referents. The resolution, however, extends these elements into firmly speculative territory and does not, IMHO, use them as a mere replacement for more realistic plot beats.
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Klaus Æ Mogensen
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I would suggest using a more contemporary short story than anything by Heinlein. His stories haven’t aged well. You can look among recent Hugo and Nebula Award winners. Or if you want an older story, use a timeless one like “Flowers for Algernon” by Daniel Keyes, “The Light of Other Days” by Bob Shaw or “The Streets of Ashkelon” by Harry Harrison.
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Chris Gavaler
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And already you can see the extreme variation in what constitutes a SF story. “Flowers for Algernon” has one SF element placed in an otherwise realistic contemporary setting, while “Neuromancer” has multiple elements including its future setting. A fuller study would have to account for those kinds of differences, which might be called degrees of SF. In the current study I created many SF elements for high contrast to the NR story which had none.
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fatherharry
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I wonder what the attitudes of the participants in the study toward science fiction were. It would be interesting to check these results with habitual readers of science fiction vs habitual readers of narrative realism fiction vs people who don’t read for pleasure.
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Chris Gavaler
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The study partly revealed those attitudes by having readers score the texts for “literary merit.” But that was specific to the text and not SF generally. So, yes, lots more research directions to keep following here!
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Rud
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When reading different genre one must know how to read them. In SF there is a lot of explanation via context that is not typical of other genres. The SF reader knows to wait for the elaboration in context that will follow, assuming the author is a good at SF. The non-SF reader is confused and frustrated. For example, would a reader 50 years ago understand the term “airlock”? Probably not and many today might not understand it. In today’s SF the term would possibly go unexplained because it is known to SF readers. Fifty years ago SF would have explained it by describing all the actions needed to use the airlock.
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Chris Gavaler
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That’s exactly right, Rud. That’s why I come up to with the term “theory of world” to account for those kinds of contextual inferences that SF so typically requires. And if high inference demands define “literary,” then SF is actually more “literary” than most narrative realism, which ironically is often called “literary fiction.”
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Rud
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I like you’re “SF is more literary”. I’ve never ‘gotten’ literature either reading it or defining it, and my wife is an PhD English Prof!! LOL McCarthy’s “The Road” left me frustrated. He wrote an SF post-apocalypse story, hit many standard SF tropes, but IMO did none of them very well.
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Chris Gavaler
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Even worse, Rud, McCarthy didn’t even acknowledge that he was working in a pre-existing genre–while duplicating exact tropes from Butler’s Parable of the Sower.
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dirk bruere
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Seems plausible in my case. I read SF for the ideas, not the characters. The latter get in the way of the story for me and I speedread past those sections.
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Chris Gavaler
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That’s fair. I like ideas AND character, or in cognitive psychology terms: theory of world AND theory of mind. That’s my working definition of literary SF.
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uberblag
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There;s a presumption that SF is only one kind of cerebral. If you change the parameters of your pieces, what’s the answer?
Who buys the cliche that SF lacks characterisation? Sure, 60 years back that was a valid point; a lot’s happened since then and I’ve read stuff where setting and mind are implied, though it has to be said, the mechanistic might yearn for more obvious stigmata on which to hang their hats.
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Chris Gavaler
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“Who buys the cliche that SF lacks characterisation?” That would probably be the readers who scored the sample SF as having lower literary merit. Personally, I think the prejudice is self-evidence nonsense. I read, teach, and write SF that has high characterization. For lack of a better term, I would call that “literary SF,” which is high in both theory-of-mind and theory-of-world, so two kinds of cerebral. Formulaic SF, in contrast, would low in both.
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uberblag
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What you’re saying is if I look at it like this, my observer position affords the following conclusions….
I don’t buy the
“science fiction is characterized as being focused on settings and content, with comparatively less emphasis on interpersonal relationships”
no matter who says it, yet this feeds into your study. You can probably tell that I’m not convinced you’ve got a great observer position.
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Chris Gavaler
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I address this point in a later post (https://thepatronsaintofsuperheroes.wordpress.com/2017/11/13/science-fiction-makes-you-stupid-part-2/), which I’ll excerpt here:
“any generalizations we suggest about the larger genres are limited to setting-based definitions. While narrative realism may include a lot of things, it typically includes a contemporary, seemingly real-world setting. But science fiction is trickier. Only a subset includes a futuristic, other-worldly setting, so our study is limited to that subset. By some definitions of science fiction, setting isn’t sufficient, since it is only a surface element. I tend to agree, though I still consider space westerns a form of science fiction. But the setting variations in the two experimental texts can produce more than just surface differences. When I tried a mini-version of the experiment unofficially with one of my advanced creative writing classes, one student inferred deeper levels of significance from the setting details, saying: “The main character feels a tension with humanity and artificial life; feels conflicted about the technological changes around him, the role that pain and messiness play in this structured, manipulated world.” No one described the setting of the narrative realism version as having as much significance.”
So, yes, if you don’t accept setting-focused genre definitions then this study doesn’t reveal anything about genre. The challenge in designing a study is to isolate and manipulate very specific elements. We chose setting markers as our starting point because they are testable. Other elements of fiction are far more slippery and so not testable. So we started where it was possible to start. But if our parameters don’t interest you, that’s reasonable too.
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uberblag
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“if our parameters don’t interest you”
That depends on the direction of your gaze. What I do (at least in principle) is flip my position as observer about until I see something interesting. Sometimes I look for patterns (which is where you are). SF can be anything. Set in the past is good because the known knowns can be nailed down and then the writer is free to fit things in. The future is amorphous and, as there’s only so much time to world-build, the construct can drift into fantasy (on your scale – my Fantasy-SF continuum is a little different to yours).
On the other hand, my starting point for analysing fiction begins with art, though the mechanics of now play a part.
I do lots of writing groups / workshops; a key frustration is the mechanistic approach. Like a spreadsheet or a list, it’s useful.
The distant observer approach gives alternate perspectives. One day, I’m convinced I’ll be able to see the edges of Science Fiction… 🙂
Hugo Gernsback what have you done?
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Chris Gavaler
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Sounds like a good approach to me.
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uberblag
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SF is a place for new ideas. Often these demand new ways of expressing them – William Burroughs made that point way back
“If writers are to describe the advanced techniques of the Space Age, they must invent writing techniques equally advanced in order properly to deal with them.”
New terms demand more context to help readers make sense of them. In particular, the genre needs to work harder on plausibility. This is where big fails are and this is a starting point for study.
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Chris Gavaler
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Right. Readers prejudiced against SF fail big when reading SF. It seems that higher theory-of-world inferencing (which is where new ideas achieve or fail to achieve plausibility) weakens their comprehension level, probably because they don’t read adequately for context cues.
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Terence Park
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Reading adequately for context cues.
Hmm. A test. I’ve a complex SF book out for review. A high-priest of philosophy (Greek Classics etc) has offerd to read it through. He’s read one of my standard SF novels but that’s no preparation for what’s waiting – if he doesn’t pick up on the cues (they’re lurking behind pacey action so they’re subtle) I’ll come back and respond. Heck I might do that anyway.
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Chris Gavaler
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Please do!
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Terence Park
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Will do.
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Terence Park
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As a pre-feedback template, here’s what I’ll be looking for from my reviewer:
a) Multiple end-of-civilisation causes. Technological conspiracy, Anglophobia, Sexually transmitted mutagen, South Sea island effect, Rapture effect. Will he choose one?
b) Entities present at the start of the universe and the source of life are Cthulhonic (may not see this if he hasn’t come across HP Lovecraft)
c) Note where Star Being hands direct events
d) that there are separate layers of alien manipulation
e) that lower order aliens are oblivious to the presence of more powerful beings
f) That many non-humans are similar in shape to everyday objects / phenomena
g) Work out why the two most powerful beings have to be female
h) The main characters look human but aren’t, although not explicitly stated this resolves into:
• chooses to look human
• has been formed to look human but knows she isn’t
• has been formed human and imagines he is
• knows she’s non-human and tries to escape that circumstance
i) Sayings¹ at the start of each chapter counterpoint story aspects – note these are Central Asian sayings and overall, link to the slim narrative I provide on Khwarezm (which if you don’t do history was the final phase of Golden Age Islam) and from there, to the collapse of the West
j) The flaw in the Darwinian theory of evolution and how the observer effect and uncertainty theory are deployed³
k) that the title¹ is more than a play on words and forms an element of the Anglophobia plot
¹ Idries Shah was an important figure in the introduction of esoteric materials to the West. I have used material from his Caravan of Dreams (ISBN 07043 30660), The Way of the Sufi (ISBN 01400.37004), A Perfumed Scorpion (ISBN 9008 60626), with permission from Octagon Press.
² The work wasn’t intended to be scientific treatise; on the other hand, if the science is there, why not put it through its paces?
³ The title went through several changes… immediately prior to publication it was known as Mandat Culturel – a reference to the C19th European carve up of the Ottoman Empire which appealed to my sense of humour. As a backdrop it makes points about civilisation, the risks of our current path and the consequences of collapse. Other points dwell on evolution, how space faring beings might handle development in primitive worlds, the source of life and the beginnings of the universe. In the end I plumped for A Guide to First Contact (ISBN 978 13266 20035, ASIN B00EUI42U2).
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Chris Gavaler
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Interesting how all of these are examples of theory-of-word, while e) and much of h) are both theory-of-world and theory-of-mind. That, I think, is where “literary SF” happens.
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Terence Park
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To borrow from a comment elsewhere, the final form was driven by considerations of art, albeit in fragmented form.
As it was a 1st novel I borrowed from Aristotle and Plato to preempt the constraints of contemporary fiction. If I wrote it now it would be a whole lot different. That was by design.
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Terence Park
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E) was always a design consideration whereas the mechanics of the tale forced gender choices and the consequential interactions (at various points they interconnect ). The story design ultimately depends on #2 which in turn is driven by the primal act of creation (in both senses). This is totally disconnected from the debate about God in the narrative
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Joel
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You’ve added extra cognitive load to the science fiction story (sky replicating ceiling instead of shadows, etc) that may come at the cost of cognitive effort elsewhere. I wonder if that could account for the discrepancy you see. I wonder if you had equally simple replacement sentences (or replaced well known science fiction tropes like a lightsaber with a more complex realistic option) whether you would see the opposite trend.
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Chris Gavaler
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Yes, that was my thought too. Effort spent on theory-of-world (ie, someone designed the ceiling to duplicate the passage of light across the sky, etc.) takes mental resources away from theory-of-mind (ie, people are angry at Jim because they feel he betrayed their social group, etc.). Surprisingly, the SF readers scored lower on both world and mind comprehension questions though.
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Joel
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Why do you say “surprisingly”? Wouldn’t we expect the extra effort spent on the untested portions of world comprehension to take away from effort available for tested world comprehension and tested mind comprehension alike, just as you found?
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Chris Gavaler
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Yes, that was and is the notion, but it was a surprise to get such clear and significant results that show it. Also, until we got the results, it wasn’t obvious that the two kinds of effort were necessarily linked.
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amadeusprofessional
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Have you considered using text from the sadly departed Iain (M) Banks? He alternated his novels between “straight” fiction (no M) and as space opera as you could wish (the middle initial M signalling a SF novel). Both had their own ways of making me uncomfortable, curious and delighted; the theories of Mind resulting from well written SF I found as challenging but compelling as the more familiar worlds.
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Chris Gavaler
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I have to admit that I’ve not read Banks, M or otherwise, but from your description, these works sound ideal. I’ll look into him.
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Geoff
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You say that the readers were randomly selected. Doesn’t that imply that a larger percentage of the subjects chosen to read science fiction (if I’m correct, I think “science fiction readers” is misleading) don’t like the type of fiction they are being asked to read? For a more extreme example, if you had chosen body horror fiction, which only a small percentage of people enjoy, or can even stand, it seems likely that a randomly-selected sample of people would find it difficult to read the text thoroughly and with comprehension.
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Chris Gavaler
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Yes, the phrase “science fiction readers” is ambiguous in the excerpt; the actual study publication makes it clear that we’re talking about those readers who read the experiment text called “Science Fiction.” And you’re also right that the random selection presumably includes readers who don’t like to read SF. The same would be true of the “narrative realism readers” group too. That’s essential for drawing any comparisons. So, yes, I think you’re exactly right: some readers appear not to have liked reading the SF text, which could account for their lower comprehension due to lower thoroughness. What’s revealing then is the wider distribution of this kind of reader. The randomized NR group likely included readers who didn’t enjoy reading that text too and so also read it with less thoroughness and comprehension as a result. But by randomizing both groups, the study suggests that there are more readers biased against SF than there are readers biased against NR.
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The Story Speculator
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I love the idea behind the study, but I am concerned that measures of comprehension require a great deal of known experience. Accurate comprehension would favour a realistic rendition over that of a science fiction rendition that requires interpretation. I could more readily comprehend a news article than poetry, for a blunt example. The closer to reality, the more readily it could be comprehended without imagination interfering with the underlying meaning. I would love to see further studies that work on emotional intelligence (which I think realism would favour) or perhaps creative intelligence (which possibly science fiction would favour), if you are of the ilk to follow such thoughts. Interesting!
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Bobby Brown
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Hi where can I learn about theory of mind and theory of world you mention throughout the entire piece. I felt confused early on cause I did not know these theories. I tried to google them, theory of mind had information, theory of world gave me nothing. I would like to start over reading it if I learned about them
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Chris Gavaler
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Hi Bobby, Theory of Mind, as you discovered, is a common term in cognitive science. Theory of World is not–because we introduced it in our study. We needed a way to talk about the kind of world-building that is so common in speculative fiction. From the reader’s perspective, when you have to make inferences about how a world works (its culture, economics, history, even laws of physics, etc.) you’re theorizing the story’s world. We call that Theory of World for short.
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